The animation is decent but...
As others have said, this Brother character of yours needs a lot of work on:
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Brother is not understood yet. I had a feeling people would think of him this way in the beginning. Just wait. Episode 2 will explain better.
That was pure awesome ^^
Can't wait for the next one.
Oh, and: "WHATS HE GANA USE TO PUT OUT HIS FLAMING HEAD?!"
The Boss's cat sounds like the only obvious solution.
not the best one around. Oh, and for the non french speakers, you didn't miss much. The french parts weren't really funny.
But thanks anyway for the time you took to review this little french tribute.
One crucial flaw in my opinion.
I think the scene titles ruined it. From what I saw, the humor all came from the spontaneousness, and the titles just ruined the surprise. I ended up seeing about two thirds of the gags coming. Otherwise, that was really good.
The titles MAY have been a bit revealing to the scene's content, but I can't think of anything else to help identify them by other than completely unrelated and random names. That or really long words that nobody would understand...
Scene titles aside, I'm very glad that you enjoyed my cartoon! Thanks for the great review!
I kinda disagree with most of them.
LOVED the second extra.
Your mom is fat! Do-Do-Do-Doo *Click*
Best flash on newgrounds. Had me laughing my ass off.
Really nice, good job. I wish I was that good :P Where'd you get the second music? I know it's from Zelda: Wind Waker, but where did you get it?
Thanks for the review. ;)
I got the Zelda music by going to Altavista Audio Search and typing in "Ouset Island", then I found a link with the above song, and many more.
But it needs to be longer and have a storyline. You've got future in the sprite animation domain.
Nice sprites, nice animation nice sounds...
I could keep going on like this for hours. Nice movie.
This is simply the best flash I've ever seen. That's all I got to say. I am in awe. *bows down to the flash god that isnachotururu*
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