Score: 8

"The animation is decent but..."

submission: The Master Games Ep 1

date: September 19, 2007

As others have said, this Brother character of yours needs a lot of work on:

"Mary Sue, sometimes shortened simply to Sue, is a pejorative term used to describe a fictional character, either male or female (though male characters are often dubbed "Larry Stu" or some other rhyming male name), that exhibits some or most of the clichés common in fan fiction, making the character itself something of a cliché. Characters were originally labeled as "Mary Sues" for being portrayed in an overly idealized way and lacking noteworthy or realistic flaws. The definition today has widened considerably to encompass most clichés found in fiction - such as having a tragic past or being shown as instantly likable - and especially that the character in question acts as a wish-fulfillment fantasy for the author who created it." - Wikipedia

Score: 9

"Looks well made, but I can't do it more."

submission: The Walls - Part One

date: August 25, 2007

This looks very good, but I couldn't get very far, this kind of odd stuff always scares me quickly.

Score: 10

"AWESOME."

submission: Dad's at Work

date: July 8, 2007

That was pure awesome ^^

Can't wait for the next one.

Oh, and: "WHATS HE GANA USE TO PUT OUT HIS FLAMING HEAD?!"

The Boss's cat sounds like the only obvious solution.

Score: 5

"Quite frankly.."

submission: Phoenix Wrong :Tribute #1

date: February 26, 2007

not the best one around. Oh, and for the non french speakers, you didn't miss much. The french parts weren't really funny.

Score: 7

"limited lives?"

submission: Digital Tunnels

date: August 11, 2006

In all technical aspects the game was really good. But honestly, limiting the lives wa a bad idea. in these kind of games with unforgiving gameplay, infinite lives is a quasi-necessity.

Score: 10

"One crucial flaw in my opinion."

submission: Mario's Blocks

date: August 11, 2006

I think the scene titles ruined it. From what I saw, the humor all came from the spontaneousness, and the titles just ruined the surprise. I ended up seeing about two thirds of the gags coming. Otherwise, that was really good.

Score: 9

"I kinda disagree with most of them."

submission: SnB: The Best Of

date: July 22, 2006

LOVED the second extra.

Air Freshener!
Sugar Free!
Alarm Clock!
Paintbrush!

Score: 10

"Your mom is fat! Do-Do-Do-Doo *Click*"

submission: The Touchtone Genius

date: November 17, 2005

Best flash on newgrounds. Had me laughing my ass off.

Score: 9

"Awesome :D"

submission: Goomzilla

date: September 9, 2005

Really nice, good job. I wish I was that good :P Where'd you get the second music? I know it's from Zelda: Wind Waker, but where did you get it?

Score: 10

"This rocks."

submission: Dad 'n Me

date: July 31, 2005

Best flash on NG. Hands down. Only prob is, sunchips hits you about 8 times straight with the uppercut or gun before you can even do anything.